Dear Sambrodude: I like these. Good experimentation with size. It would be good to think a bit more about the form of each shape, rather than making things so flat and linear. For example, the waistline should be a curved line as it wraps around the body, not just a straight line. I can show you more of what I mean in class, if you like!
I agree with Dorian. You seem to have an easy sense of proportion and size. It'd be nice to see you play with the shapes and such a bit more -- rather than just making a fat and a skinny version of the original drawing. Maybe change up the leg to torso ratio, or play with where the weight on the person sits.
Dear Sambrodude: I like these. Good experimentation with size. It would be good to think a bit more about the form of each shape, rather than making things so flat and linear. For example, the waistline should be a curved line as it wraps around the body, not just a straight line. I can show you more of what I mean in class, if you like!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Dorian. You seem to have an easy sense of proportion and size. It'd be nice to see you play with the shapes and such a bit more -- rather than just making a fat and a skinny version of the original drawing. Maybe change up the leg to torso ratio, or play with where the weight on the person sits.
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